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dforduchi last won the day on February 10 2017

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  1. Congrats guys, these are amazing! Hope to see more of your writing in the future!
  2. Omg I haven't got the time to read the stories again because i barely had connection-- but I'm sure it's awesome! Gaaaahhh, good luck to the deadliners!
  3. You're welcome ^^ Ahaha, I truly enjoyed it, and I can't wait to see your finished comic~ Dw, you're not the only one. I wanna make comic for tro since last year but I haven't even start anything yet Aww.. Thank you so much for the additional info. Now my guesses confirmed! Ah.. dw. I can't even remember how Luoyang look alike. Haven't been there for ages.. = v = ` Anyway, have a nice weekend!
  4. Yes, I can tell from the paragraphs about how much experience you have in writing ^^ Are you a sherlockian? Just wondering. Aww.. that's just heart breaking. And those were a lot to think about, I like it when the story gives us something to wonder. It usually opens new perspective. Also, your protagonist is probably the only one here so far among the entries, that witnessed the events rather than experienced it himself. I enjoyed reading it.
  5. Aww.. I thought she went to Valhalla and get replaced by another Valk.. Now I imagine the hw returns every valentine only for her to forget again. That's just sad..
  6. You're welcome @ihazbackuptalon ! *high fives back* Thank you for the kind compliment, and yes, it is kinda sad. I sorta create the 'what's not meant to be doesn't meant to be' story. They have mutual attraction but it doesn't mean that the other person is their other half at least yet. Ahaha, Fenrir use gentleman word to joke around, he himself doesn't see him as one, considering his attitude to most people, and there's the job too. But I personally think he is, even when he denies it. ^^ And yes, the use of reference is amazing! You paid great attention to details--it's so worth it because I can imagine this person really lives in Midgard ahaha. I'd love to. Lemme know if you wanna start it. I laughed so hard, thinking that the story is so funny, and cute, and super shippable... but in the end I was like.... 'Why do you do this??' Although, it does make a good strategy, lmao. The story itself is so well written! I love reading it, your descriptions are great, and I also love the refreshing feel I got from the narration--at least until half of the story. I felt dreadful when read the rest.. Lel, good luck trying @ihazbackuptalon ! I'd love to try too but the mob will kill me first *waves handkerchief
  7. Aww.. Don't worry sir, all be fine in the end. You just need to keep moving. And anyway, I get your message and feel your sadness as well. It's great experience to write the story down.
  8. Aww.. you're welcome dear Feel better soon. If love fails you, go for some adventure. Things will work well, in time ^^ Just finished reading all entries and boy! We have lots of talented writers here, I completely agree with you, @guiapq! The plots are original and creative, aside from the sad setting they take XD @lucy123 story is tragic, and it's relatable, my heart breaks for the two--I can't imagine being Lucy, and I can see similar things happen to people with the same tragedy. I love Morroc's Love by @roeuzinho ! It gives twist, and at the beginning I had no idea that it's about the birth of Satan Morroc (please correct me if I misinterpreted). @guiapq is another thumbs up for constructing such story of Umbala. The way you write about the interaction between the protagonist and the chief feels so real, and the ending is heart breaking.. @ADMS sir, I bow down to you! This is by far, the best one narrated. So neat, great use of punctuation, no typos--I see the work of pro writer! My favorite so far, however, is @Nheki 's Untold Story. It's simple, but the plot surprisingly deep. I love the way you use the Rebirth concept, how two protagonists take turns to start the journey, The most touching part is I think, because the mind forgets, but the heart remembers.. TT___TT Anyway, I applaud everyone for job well done! I know how hard it is to construct a story, to come up with concept. Thank you for writing these stories for us, I personally had fun reading them, and I can't wait to see future entries ^^ And of course, thanks GM for this opportunity. I'm glad that you give chance to writers as well. Whoa, virtual high five please! XD Same, mine has more background and details. You're doing a cool job edit it--and gosh, I'm falling in love with Kael and his routine.. He's so different from my character, Fenrir, A straight vs Trickster character. I'm sorry about Tabby.. //pats him If only there's an opportunity / section for it, I would love to RP with you and Kael, while I'll be using Ghost. I think it'll be interesting to see how the two interacts and creates another story. I wanted to write from Ghost's PoV. Heck I wanna RP with the heartbreak survivors in the stories
  9. THE PHANTOM OF VALENTINE IGN “Snow Raven” 3500 words *Theme Song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T-NAD2qtKo8 *Translation http://www.dreamslandlyrics.com/2016/10/aimer-akanesasu-lyrics.html Happy Valentine! I had fun writing this piece, it brought so much feels.. I’m sorry if it kinda fast paced on some parts, because it was originally 4100 words when I finished lol. But I did my best with the editing, so it’s still relatable for the readers. If you ever want to read the longer version, do pm and I’ll send the link to you Stay healthy, and have a great time—not just now, but for the other days to come
  10. Aww.. Love takes time to grow and matured. I'm so glad I get to see this in your story ^^
  11. Your story is bittersweet.. I hope the two will find happiness in the end.. Anyway, don't forget to put your IG name with your entry post. I think it's mandatory in the rules ^^
  12. Hai Tantee o3o

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    2. KousakaSatou

      KousakaSatou

      Yes, i am. /heh

      i don't understand how to do with this "dns" stuff, padahal kemaren" gpp tuh eh pas di tinggal gak maen 2 hari jadi kayak gini.

      *checks internet* nope, it  still stuck at 2mb /gg

      and i tried the kRo (Ragnarok Patch) and it says like "Failed to retrieve"-blablabla

      so pencerahan nya senpaii D:

    3. dforduchi

      dforduchi

      Maaf baru bales, kemaren sibuk ngurus ini itu /ok

      Waduh... Gimana ya? Udah lama banget. Dulu sih kalau aku cuma klik dns-nya 2x, nunggu sampe install n iconnya berubah ijo (kalau belum klik ikonnya dan yang warnanya orange di klik2in sampe ijo), abis itu baru main gamenya dan jalan, deh.

      Udah coba reinstall belom?

      Saya juga baru main Feb tahun kemaren jadi hardly dibilang senpai, jadi kalau nggak bisa juga, aku juga ndak mudeng.. /heh

      Coba tanya member yang emang udah melanglang buana di sini, deh. Atau nggak cari-cari sekitar forum? Biasanya banyak yang problemnya sama. Maaf ya nggak bisa banyak bantu, aku juga gaptek tingkat ndewa ini mah.. oTL

    4. KousakaSatou

      KousakaSatou

      maksud nya klik DNS sampe warna ijo? wkwkwk apaan yak?

      udah coba reinstall malah. tapi tetep gitu.

      DNS nya ngaruh ke semua, ketorrent sama yang lain gitu. /bzz

  13. I think it is, since yours atm counts as WIP ^^ Just make sure to edit your entry later. And btw, loving your work so far! It's very cute and entertaining. I can't wait to see the colored version, and also the others who participate
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